I think its great but not keen on lights in the background of the image.
I find my eye distracted by it or something.
I nearly like it.. and don't mind the background, but the skin is a funny colour. Kind of magenta with hints of blue. Revisit the WB, maybe?
The background is fairly indistinct; I'd just get the WB 'right' for the subject and ignore the background in this case.Thanks Juggler yes I’ll do that. Trying balance flash with ambient wb is tricky.