Really good detail and a nice light angle has given you that all important catchlight in the eye with a lovely head angle.
I don't know if it was possible with the location, but if you could have moved a little ti your left you might have been able to avoid the orange blob on the foreground rock.
You could always just de-saturate the colours on the orang blob leaving the rest of the shot the same using a saturation adjustment layer and only targeting the blob.
It improves the shot in my eyes as it keeps focus on the subject, which in itself is lovely.
Mike