Contemplation

Well composed there, but I think the figure should be more prominent in the shot.
 
It's almost great. I think the subject is prominent enough (mostly due to the orange top), what spoils it for me is the only other things in focus which fights for our attention.
 
a good idea but far too many distractions and OOF in the background which all draw attention away from the subject
 
the oof in the background was supposed to enhance the idea of being lost in contemplation, I originally didn't want to crop too closely to give an idea of where she was, but what about this?
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