- Edit My Images
Those buildings clutter any feeling of emptiness for me. I'd be inclined to step around to the right and reframe the image against a simple background of land, sea & air. Grass is optional It'll probably be harder to work the composition as I guess it could be argued that the buildings and grass add balance.I was trying to show the boat in it's environment, which a large expanse of wild and exposed emptiness.
No need to get higher, get lower and raise the transom above the horizon line. It only needs to be a midge's higher than the horizon.Thank you all. It just goes to show how personal an image is and how there is no right or wrong.
Below is a very quick edit of the same boat with, I think, some of the suggestions. I'm sorry the boat has broken the horizon but I am only 5' 5" and I couldn't get high enough!! next time I go I will take a crate
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