Couple of Swans





Wow, Charles! (y)(y)(y)
Your best shot at this point… you're almost there!
This makes me very happy for you, great effort.

Nice composition, cool light and tonal ratios but
there is still a sparkle missing. See if you could
fix that through mid-tones taming.
 
Thanks Daniel for your kind and encouraging comment. I had them framed up for a good 10 minutes before pressing the shutter release just waiting for that pose.
 




Wow, Charles! (y)(y)(y)
Your best shot at this point… you're almost there!
This makes me very happy for you, great effort.

Nice composition, cool light and tonal ratios but
there is still a sparkle missing. See if you could
fix that through mid-tones taming.


Is this over done Daniel?:)

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At least my attempt wasn't a total disaster


For sure not, Rebecca. The jpg file has lost too
much of the original recorded data and, in the
case of both ends of the histogram, it is even
useless to try… one has to go back to the RAW. :cool:
 
Daniel no wonder you said my edit was not very pretty. I have just viewed it on my desktop. What a horrible sight.:puke::puke:. Please when something is rubbish say its rubbish;)(y)
 
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