First try with beauty dish flash.

[YorkeHouse Photography]

Color and B&W edits.

 

[YorkeHouse Photography]

new edits. any cc on lighting?

 

[Sir SR]

Quite like the pose but not sure about the strip of light on her neck. I find that a bit distracting for my tastes.

 

[Deleted member 34016]

Quite like the pose but not sure about the strip of light on her neck. I find that a bit distracting for my tastes.

Les

 

[YorkeHouse Photography]

thank you for your feedback i will try and tone it down a bit.

 

[Pete1785]

Love shot 1 as it brings out the tiles as well as the face. Great shot