Critique Fleet Pond

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I took my son, his friend and the dog around Fleet Pond on Sunday.
I brought along the camera as I wanted to practice grabbing natural shots on the move and also wanted to see if I could get some consistent processing done.
So I'm looking for CC on the processing ( I tend to over expose, so they look slightly underexposed to me) mainly please, however if there is anything else please do say.











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They look like a lovely collection to me. You could lift exposure a little without doing ay harm, but not much.

Specific crit - image 3 feels like it leans just a little too much *for me* and with the final image, if you could have moved a few inches further left to completely separate the fence from the dog (unless you deliberately hid its bum) then it would be little stronger.
 
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My pick, for sure Alan, goes to #6!

An incredible moment where three buddies
are sharing the same curiosity! Very cool!
…see PM!
 
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These don't look underexposed to me ... they are all what you intended, natural shots and I really love the last.
Unfortunately you have cut off the feet in #2 and #3 and that affects the images for me ... #1, #4# and #5 not so much, though it might have been good to have more or less of the front child in #5.
All in all though a good attempt at what you were trying to acheive :)
 
ancient_mariner said:
They look like a lovely collection to me. You could lift exposure a little without doing ay harm, but not much.

Specific crit - image 3 feels like it leans just a little too much *for me* and with the final image, if you could have moved a few inches further left to completely separate the fence from the dog (unless you deliberately hid its bum) then it would be little stronger.
Click to expand...

I would of liked them in the middle however I didn't want to spoil it by telling them to move over, I did move more to my left however they all moved!!! (bloody kids) The more I look it the BG the more I notice how much tilt is on nr 3

Thank for all for commenting
 
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Another +1 for No6
half a step to the left to give separation between the rear of the dog and the post would have given isolation to the 3 Amigos...
Still, a great image.
 
#3 and #5 for me. I don't know if it's my eyes (and nit picking) but the little boy to the back in #3 appears a little OOF. Was he moving? But that doesn't stop me liking it. The interaction and the setting.
 
The last image works very well, simple yet effective, almost tells a story

The other aint too shabby either :D

Les
 
the last image is good, perhaps a touch more to the left (leading line goes to doggies bottom)!
the third image has good engagement - as if you are an observer - plenty of room to have included their feet and less of the sky though
 
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