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Maryla
 
You're nailing the techs on these Maryla, and some nice poses as well.

I'm guessing this a station you've set up, so I'd suggest the way of pushing these on further would be to look at the angle of light and position the food accordingly. As an example, the first and last are really nice shots but the light is coming from the left, so has nearly blown the whites on the wing bars, and put the face and breast into a little bit of shadow. If you compare that to the face and whites details on number 3, hopefully the subtle difference can be noted. Having the face in shadow also makes the face whites look a little blue.

I'm not knocking your work, it's very good, just trying to give you food for thought.

Mike
 
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pooley said:
You're nailing the techs on these Maryla, and some nice poses as well.

I'm guessing this a station you've set up, so I'd suggest the way of pushing these on further would be to look at the angle of light and position the food accordingly. As an example, the first and last are really nice shots but the light is coming from the left, so has nearly blown the whites on the wing bars, and put the face and breast into a little bit of shadow. If you compare that to the face and whites details on number 3, hopefully the subtle difference can be noted. Having the face in shadow also makes the mace whites look a little blue.

I'm not knocking your work, it's very good, just trying to give you food for thought.

Mike
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Thanks Mike, I'll take your advice into consideration. I am still learning, I already started moving perches around my station but I am a bit limited with space there :/
 
Nice series with some good constructive comments above.If it is a set up you may want to look for some 'nicer' perches (subjective, I know).

TFS
 
nc_killie said:
Nice series with some good constructive comments above.If it is a set up you may want to look for some 'nicer' perches (subjective, I know).

TFS
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Thank you John, I am still working on it. I've had some nice perches there but I am sharing this place with about 15 geese and they picking all green moss or leaves when I am not around :banghead: ;)
 
fab set
 
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