Critique How can I improve this?

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Jason Simons
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Hi there all im very new to photography and I was out walking and took a snap of this church. How could I improve it and make it look better please? Thanks.
 

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The most obvious are:

— the lack of DR
— the absence of micro contrast
— need keystoning tweaks.

As for the general tonalities, revisiting
the WB prior to conversion could be a
good idea.

…hope that helps.


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The first glaring error for me is chopping the top of the flag pole thingy off. If you're going to chop bits off an image, it has to look deliberate. Verticals are an issue too.
 
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