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... aka another critique request
Here's my attempt from the Modern World theme "The Modern World at Your Fingertips".
It was intended to show that in the modern world, anything and everything is now available from your desktop - just one quick search away. I think I can see that the cursor is a little distracting and I could have done with increasing the dof to get the screen fully in focus (focus was fixed on the keyboard).
What, in your very humble opinions, could I have done to improve this shot?
Thanks all
Here's my attempt from the Modern World theme "The Modern World at Your Fingertips".
It was intended to show that in the modern world, anything and everything is now available from your desktop - just one quick search away. I think I can see that the cursor is a little distracting and I could have done with increasing the dof to get the screen fully in focus (focus was fixed on the keyboard).
What, in your very humble opinions, could I have done to improve this shot?
Thanks all