As usual, very much FWIW and saying nothing about the white balance on some of them
Second and third in - second is just a record shot of a building, it's boring as hell and it's of no interest whatsoever to anybody but the couple, therefore you don't need to blog it. The third simply doesn't work, if for no other reason than the foxglove isn't even properly open!
Frock shot's superb (even though it probably loses a point for the shoes being not separated enough) but you don't need six details between the shoes shot and the first human being on a blog post.
Second prep shot - I'd zap that bottle on her head on the left.
Window + kid with ball and the bride's head in that mirror are very well seen, and the bride's mascara going on's well caught.
Bride in silhouette. A profile shot of a woman with a big nose is
never a good idea on a blog, even if the subject has no problem with it. Trust me on this. I'm married to a woman who thinks she has one.
The rest of those prep shots are excellent, although if it was mine, I'd have to zap those sockets against the bride's head.
The cow portrait doesn't work for me. You needed to be lower and on a wider lens to get the dynamic it needs.
Bride hair above the two women laughing is a mess. You needed to be to your left and lower to make that work, and the record shot of the table flowers is a non-picture for a blog. All it does is dilute the impact of the good stuff.
The bride's boots shot is superb. Well done mister.
Colour shot of bride sitting on bed is also a little gem, and that back of dress shot is better than anything I ever managed. All it needs is that drawer handle zapping.
Procession and ceremony are very nice, but I'd bin the b/w above the confetti shot. It serves no purpose and does you no favours. Confetti and scoff on a plank are lovely, as are the flip flops and the bits of dead animal on a platter.
I'd also bin the first b/w "carver" shot on the grounds that it's a non-picture.
Speech shots are a mixed bag. You don't need the first b/w one when to all intents and purposes it's the same shot as the colour one above it which has more impact, and it's just a weak variant of the closer one below, which is really nice.
Flowers presentation doesn't work. You were in the wrong place to get it, and really, what's the point of it anyhow? Surely the recipient's reaction is what you want?
I can't comment usefully on the couple shots as I have no experience of that kind of approach, and the same goes for the first four couple first dance shots. After that though they're fine AFAIC apart from I'd bin the one below the band shot on the grounds that it dilutes the impact of the rest, and besides there's way too much armpit and big arm central.
Overall, it's excellent. I can't see any aspect in particular that you might usefully concentrate on as regards approach, technique, coverage or whatever. If you do have a problem
(apart from the erratic white balance!) it's picture selection for the blog. I reckon you're thinking too much about the couple and not enough about the impression made on potential customers. I also suspect you may perhaps have a problem which took me a while to get over i.e. thinking too much in terms of "story of the day" when it comes to blog posts and not concentrating on the snaps with impact. The result of that is fillers diluting your "product", which in this case is the blog post.
HTH a bit