Even though you say it did not work, it is a good effort and it is dark.
Tim
Good on you trying a different route for Dark, even if it does not work, for me it's all about learning and you need to fail to learn lessions.I'm not that good with processing, but I expect you need to use a mask and darken the background.
Overall the Image is another excellant shot, composition is good but a bit more space at top and bottom may help but it's difficult to tell with the dark processing you have applied.
Pete.
I tend to agree that it hasn't worked out, I don't think the blue sky and clouds top left help either but it's worth trying these things and the 52 is a good place to do that.
Think I agree with Pete you need to create a mask, as it is a very well composed shot, and works for me except for the sky. I think the 52 is the place to try out different ideas, good on you Tim for giving it a go.
It doesn;t work but still - if we don't try we don't learn. Well done for not going for the easy shot and having a crack at something different!
Not sure if anyone has pointed it out to you but “Dark” doesn’t workLol No, really? And there was me thinking it was a masterpiece.
Damn all those sugar coated comments
okay, okay, it was carp wasn't it. I'm not afraid to post rubbish when I fsck up.
(fsck = command to file system check on linux ext2 filesystems before anyone accuses me of sidestepping the swear filter).
Hi Michael,Hi Tim, not seen 92212 for a while, where was this? Worth a try. As you have yes on edit, I tried a b+w conversion in zoner, upped the exposure and contrast and a little de haze adjustment, hope that is ok.
44225590322_11fefb00ba_b by Michael Johnson, on Flickr
Hi Michael,
Yes, I think that does work better. I tried a B&W conversion but didn't do much with it. I think you've definitely made a significant improvement.
Pretty amazing what can be recovered from a deliberately underexposed image...
The mono also hide's Dave's Hi-Vis somewhat (he was chatting to the crew).
92212 was taken at Ropley. It was waiting for the Crompton to come in with the RAT ECS from Alresford, which was running a bit late (should have been in by 17:45, this was taken at 17:52).
I can't quite remember when it did turn up, but I know we were about 10-15 minutes later into Alton than we like to be, and the platform was heaving.
Your edit is far better than my originalPleased you like it, I was surprised how well it edited.
Indeed, perhaps another attempt in the future, or perhaps noted down as "don't try that again!"Dark
It's a tricky one to comment on really, the composition is good, the idea was good. It just didn't work out this time.
nah, it really doesn'tGood effect, Tim. You put a lot of work into it and it works to an extent.
Cheers Roger. A bit of a fortunate capture that. A fraction of a second either way, or a different angle and that wouldn't have appeared.I like the first one, definitely something different a great capture.
Second shot is my favourite to be honest, maybe because I like the cat face!
Cheers Allan, it was the yellow light that drew me to it.The splash of yellow in the first is a nice touch I would maybe have placed the grid at the bottom of the frame maybe a square crop, the second one fits the theme better in a way because it’s such a big splash
Yes, the old TZ is really not an action camera. I took quite a few goes to get something reasonable, guessing exaclty when the shutter would fire.Tim
Refuse - On Theme, like the glove being in focus and the eye well OOF, nice effect. Blue also adds boldness. Can't workout what has happened to the arm just below the glove, it looks a bit odd.
Splash - I prefer the first shot myself, must have been difficult with the shutter lag those types of cameras have. Second is a bigger splash but not a nice pattern (even with the cat face).
Perhaps, but less engaging for that.Plenty of water splash there. For me, I prefer #2 with fewer distractions.
A faster shut would probably have helped, but that old P&S doesn't like highish ISOs. Wrong canera for the job really, but the only one I was willing to take with me.They've both got merits, I wonder if the first would have been a bit stronger with a faster shutter speed but as you say the colours are good. I do like the second perhaps because of the intensity of the splash and the composition.
Other PoVs were possible (I was crouched for that shot) and attempted.The first one for me. A slightly lower pov may have been better, but not always possible.
Without spoiling it, has it connections with Hong Kong and Singapore more now! On the corner of a poultry little road and I dare not mention where in case I get thrown out the labour party?
Beaten to it, it’s Boy with a goose midland bank HQ junction of Poultry with Old Jewry and it’s by Sir William Reid Dick R.A.
@Bearair he's really going to have to try harder than that isn’t he
Reckon so Allan, the power of google is mighty!
Pretty much no change in them to the SOOC raw (maybe a bit lighter). I don't actually remember what they looked like in real life.Nice shot Tim, my only comment is that the greens look a bit flat, but that's probably just me.
That bridge is actually the one that spanned Kings Cross station, and has starred in such films as Harry Potter and The 39 Steps before they removed it from the station and replaced it with an 'accessible' one.Nice one, Tim. I think you have captured the essence of the theme for me and the cast iron bridge background complements the steam era.
The sky was about 1 stop over exposed (down to the fact I was shooting in the other direction and didn't hear the 4 coming until she was right on top of us, so didn't change any settings).Nice one - I like a Standard 4
Funny about the highlights - did you shoot RAW? My X-Pro2 does a fine job on highlight recovery. Essentially the ame camera different box.
First thing I noticed is it needs a slight anti clockwise turn the verticals seem slightly off and a slightly closer crop, it doesn't dominate the frame as it should, but otherwise a good interpretation of the theme
I evidently hadn't looked for verticals, they certainly didn't jump out at me, but LR seems to agree with you. Not that I'm certain that all the verticals are actually vertical IRLTim
Creatures, well captured Image, Statue stands out well from the background. I think I would have cropped that highlighted bit at the bottom.
Pulled, another good Image, Explaination of being caught unexpected accepted.Allan has made some points that I can see.
Pete
Thanks Andrea The Std 4 in the Pull(ed) shot is actually one of the smaller locos on the line. She is quite smart looking, especially in BR lined black.Hi Tim, I've missed so much while I've been slacking with my own 52, so looking back over the ones of yours that I've missed I really like the simplicity of the Underground roundel for Round, with the red of the sign really popping off the screen. Refuse is a good take on the theme (and something I considered as that's usually the view I get if I point my camera at our lads!) and I like the details you have captured in the glove, which is prominent in the frame and makes the point very strongly.
I like both images for Splash and #1 is probably my favourite of the two. At first I thought the fountain centre was too central but in fact it balances nicely with the water drops flying in the top half and the motion blurred water and splashes in the bottom. I agree that the colour and reflection helps to lift the whole image
Yay - a train for Pulled! I never saw that coming This is a lovely engine and great choice for the theme, and much more impressive than the wee things we have here. Being picky I reckon you could lose a little bit off the bottom and left to bring the engine more to the fore, but it works well nonetheless as you can see the head of the train it's pulling behind it
As per comment to Allan & Pete, I wanted space on the left for the loco to move into.I'm not train 'tog but it somehow feels a bit small in the frame and lacking in a bit of energy, not quite sure why.