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  1. beercan

    beercan

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    Hi all,
    I managed to get up to London again last week so took the chance to take a few shots.
    Looking for any feedback on how these could be improved please?
    What works/doesn't work etc? (y)

    Thank you for looking!

    *Image sizes increased to enable better feedback.*
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    And here's something a little different from the rest...

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    Last edited: Mar 5, 2013
  2. JakeT1992

    JakeT1992

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    Bigger images would be easier to give crit on. Is a nice set, for me the first and the last work best, however I feel the highlights need pulling back as the area around Westminster looks very bright.
     
  3. furq

    furq

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    Was going to say the same about Westminster.

    Also, I like the framing of the second shot.
     
  4. beercan

    beercan

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    Thanks guys, I have increased the size of the images and will look at the highlights on Westminster.

    Regards
     
  5. mrtoad

    mrtoad

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    2 strikes me as being the best and most well composed with wing interests leading to the main event
    the only centrally themed shot i have liked so far
    cheers
    geof
     
  6. beercan

    beercan

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    I have edited Westminster and toned the lights down a little.
    Is this better?
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    Regards
     
  7. JakeT1992

    JakeT1992

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    That's miles better mate!
     
  8. sebct

    sebct

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    I really like number 2! I'd also be interested in seeing the last one in colour perhaps?
     

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