Agree with Les re the focusing (extremely difficult if using autofocus when shooting eyes through a veil).
However, I love No1, beautiful rich dark tones and smooth gradations.
I'd be tempted to (here we go on my panorama style again), take a little more off the chin and some of the hair and top veil too.
I'm just moving the image up and down on my iPad and for me, there an image in there also.