Montage

[redmonkee]

Following the series of B&W portraits of my daughter I thought i'd try a montage.

Would be interested to know if you guys think this works.

Thanks for looking

Lilia montage-1 by Phil Carver, on Flickr

 

[alexkidd]

It's a bit dated in style for me but if you like it then it's all good

 

[Bobsyeruncle]

I like it, but I'd be tempted to show them the other way round, so as you look at them from left to right, you have no smile, small smile then big smile.

 

[redmonkee]

It's a bit dated in style for me but if you like it then it's all good

No worries Alex, each to their own

 

[redmonkee]

I like it, but I'd be tempted to show them the other way round, so as you look at them from left to right, you have no smile, small smile then big smile.

Hi Robert. Thanks for your feedback. Think your suggested order may be worth a play around with. Only did it this way due to the right hand image being shot much closer than the other 2.