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Toni
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Too many to crit properly, but I'll do a couple:

Triangle thing - good subject, sensible blur to background. The conversion is just a bit dull - nothing is really black or white - and it doesn't quite pop.

Pigeon hole 1 - needs to be in black & white with high contrast to leave just the hole around the pigoen.

Fishing bits - interesting textures and shapes there.
 
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KingSaxlingham
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Benjamin
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Thanks for the feedback. I've done the updates on the Pigeon Hole and it does look loads better.

I really need to get some proper editing software, I've only got the standard windows editor!

Thanks again.
 
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I really need to get some proper editing software, I've only got the standard windows editor!
Yes. Yes you do.

Didn't you buy an A7III & 24-240 lens? Download the Sony Express edition (a bit crippled, but better than nowt) of Capture One's software for free software. If you don't mind spending a little money then look at either DXO PhotoLab or On1 Photoraw 2020 (my preferred option of the 2) which you can download & try FOC for 30 days.
 
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