Lovely shot, I prefer the original as well, the warmth, contrast and composition goes missing in Geof's take, for some reason, and I too feel that the clouds really add to the image - I can see what Geof is suggesting with the composition of the second and usually that would work well for a lot of reflection scenes but here the original composition works best. But I think it should be very much commended when someone goes out of their way to try and help others with their photography, there's more to that than just clicking 'Like' so well done for that. And well done for a nice image too.