I quite like that Neil although I do have more of a preference for you monochrome work.
Of course I'm biased as I no longer shoot colour with film!
Like you have done here, I used the C41 kits…….Was this developed using the tetenal kit or another brand?
The only part of this particular image that bothers me a tad is the BG......Presumably what could be mistaken as huge grain, is the BG cloth?