This looks like the car is the source of the smoke/dust. Plenty of interest here, but for me, it feels like the car needs more space in front - this is too cramped, and the lack of space suggests a lack of motion.
No small hatchback is ever going to get that much smoke going out the back
I think without the parked car this would work a lot better.
Thank you!The more I look at it, the more I like it. I cans ee the bear, but there's something surreal about the disparate elements of the composition that appeals.
Preponderant atmosphere, resplendent whilst ominous.
Fab as always ≔)