Quickie from the end of a workshop

Far be it for me to criticise something I couldn't achieve, so my only observation is that, I don't like the oof orange thing on the rhs.
 
I'm surprised this hasn't got more comments but then that's probably because it really is very good and any crit would just be nit-picking. Lovely tones complement the sentiment of the composition, what's not to like?
 
I love the image and the lighting is lovely, but I do find my eye drawn to the highlight on her dress.
 
Works for me, subtle, elegant, very nice.
 
I cheekily grabbed a couple of minutes with the model at the end of a workshop I was teaching.

(fwiw it looks a bit overlit to me and I'm not sold on the framing so I'll take those as read.. any other comments welcome)

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its a bit confusing
the lights detract and so does the blurred item bottom right
i dont think the necklace necessary either
but it does all go with the mood of a nocturne..chopin is the best
 
If it was mine I'd be the same :D

Make is square (bottom-handless) and it'll be perfect :)

Dave

..but then it would lose the leading lines and the context of the piano..
I suppose I could find a similar wider shot from the set and merge them but that seems like a lot of work for something which was a throwaway from the end of a workshop!
 
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