Quickie from the end of a workshop

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I'm surprised this hasn't got more comments but then that's probably because it really is very good and any crit would just be nit-picking. Lovely tones complement the sentiment of the composition, what's not to like?
 
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I love the image and the lighting is lovely, but I do find my eye drawn to the highlight on her dress.
 
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I think it has a lot going for it, my 'problem' is the disconnected hand - obviously we assume its hers on the keys but because its chopped off it might not be, hence I don't like chopped off bits of people usually

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Works for me, subtle, elegant, very nice.
 
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I cheekily grabbed a couple of minutes with the model at the end of a workshop I was teaching.

(fwiw it looks a bit overlit to me and I'm not sold on the framing so I'll take those as read.. any other comments welcome)

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its a bit confusing
the lights detract and so does the blurred item bottom right
i dont think the necklace necessary either
but it does all go with the mood of a nocturne..chopin is the best
 
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If it was mine I'd be the same :D

Make is square (bottom-handless) and it'll be perfect :)

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..but then it would lose the leading lines and the context of the piano..
I suppose I could find a similar wider shot from the set and merge them but that seems like a lot of work for something which was a throwaway from the end of a workshop!
 
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