B&W Radio Flyer

Interesting subject, and one that's tricky to compose. If I may crit, I'd say it could do with being a bit crisper on the text at the top - focus seems to be behind that as visible on the strap running across the bottom - to confirm that is the subject to the eye when it lands there.
 
ancient_mariner said:
Interesting subject, and one that's tricky to compose. If I may crit, I'd say it could do with being a bit crisper on the text at the top - focus seems to be behind that as visible on the strap running across the bottom - to confirm that is the subject to the eye when it lands there.
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I used BBF but I think I must have moved forward a bit when recomposing.
 
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