Critique Retro Concrete

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Did you work the shot Jason or is this your only take?
 
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I like that :)

Texture is good
 
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The shot is uncropped and has been "worked" in Nik silver Efex. Just some alteration to contrast and detail really. I tried to get the lead in line run from the bottom left corner, albeit a border full of grass and leaves. I am interested to hear what others would have done.
 
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I agree a wee step to the right would've worked better. You'd have lost the over-bright gap & maybe strengthened the line?
I'd be okay with a bit more absolute black too but that might just be my taste
 
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The shot is uncropped and has been "worked" in Nik silver Efex. Just some alteration to contrast and detail really. I tried to get the lead in line run from the bottom left corner, albeit a border full of grass and leaves. I am interested to hear what others would have done.
Probably gone a little further right and a little further forwards to use the framing of the archway more & lose the patches of sky as much as possible. HTH.
 
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