Critique Retro Concrete




Did you work the shot Jason or is this your only take?
 
I like this, but would have possibly preferred a shot taken standing further to the right.

Nice textures and conversion.
 
I like that :)

Texture is good
 
The shot is uncropped and has been "worked" in Nik silver Efex. Just some alteration to contrast and detail really. I tried to get the lead in line run from the bottom left corner, albeit a border full of grass and leaves. I am interested to hear what others would have done.
 
I agree a wee step to the right would've worked better. You'd have lost the over-bright gap & maybe strengthened the line?
I'd be okay with a bit more absolute black too but that might just be my taste
 
The shot is uncropped and has been "worked" in Nik silver Efex. Just some alteration to contrast and detail really. I tried to get the lead in line run from the bottom left corner, albeit a border full of grass and leaves. I am interested to hear what others would have done.

Probably gone a little further right and a little further forwards to use the framing of the archway more & lose the patches of sky as much as possible. HTH.
 
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