Wild Romantic Tête à Tête

[Kodiak Qc]

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[Box Brownie]

I can see the intent but for me it does not quite "say that to me" as the space between them is maybe that bit too big.

They are that bit too small in the frame and the right-hand swan's reflection is cut off, plus there are green areas in the background that are brighter than others and they draw the eye away from the primary subject.

 

[Kodiak Qc]

the space between them is maybe that bit too big.

…maybe their first rendez-vous?

 

[Box Brownie]

…maybe their first rendez-vous?

peut être but maybe you are over anthropomorphic about them

 

[Kodiak Qc]

peut être but maybe you are over anthropomorphic about them

That's called poésie, dear Sir!