I like both of them. Think I prefer the top one though, my eyes tend to drift to the background over the models shoulder (I'm curious to see more), but then the eyes draw me back over to the actual subject.
I have to say that those eyes are super. I'd be wanting to get in even closer. Much prefer #2 as there's far less distraction (plus it's closer) and the slightly higher POV has lifted her head and her gaze - which add to the image IMO. My eye keeps wandering to the cracked plaster on the RH side though. AlI want to do is pick it off