Critique Sky

[AJR SIMPSON]

I like this angle with the top of the Church beyond the hill but does it work? (as the sun set tonight)
Parish Church as the sun sets 28-4-16 by andrew simpson, on Flickr

 

[buxtonmick]

Hi Andrew, I'll confirm what you already know; no it doesn't work. I think the lack of foreground, the church cut in half and the distracting grey cloud in the top left ruin it!

 

[AJR SIMPSON]

Hi Andrew, I'll confirm what you already know; no it doesn't work. I think the lack of foreground, the church cut in half and the distracting grey cloud in the top left ruin it!

Thanks for the input Mick, I understand and see what you are saying.

 

[Craig20264]

Works for me now. I like it. Nice change from the norm.

 

[AJR SIMPSON]

Works for me now. I like it. Nice change from the norm.

I did think about removing the cloud at the time but somehow convinced myself that it fitted or did I go and pour some wine and forget?
The crop works too, thanks Craig.