So I've done something more serious!

[sconner]

Hey, finally got a chance to up my photography game a bit, trying to go a bit more pro into the shoot. Let me know what you think!

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Thanks for watching!

 

[sconner]

Continued:

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[ianmarsh]

I like these a lot. I would hope your subjects would be delighted. The processing is excellent too. I liked the B&Ws but the colour ones look even better.

I am not keen on the first one but I cannot exactly say why - something to do with the lipstick being very dark, I think. She doesn't look comfortable in 5, and 12 looks too posed and static.

On the other hand, 2, 3, 6, 8, 9,12 and 13 are each really good and together make a super set. 2, 3 and 9 are outstanding. The clipped shoe in 9 bugs me but I think that is just a photographer's view and the subjects shouldn't care.

 

[gremlin16]

The first two and #10 are miles below the good standard of the rest.

Out of interest, what focal length were you at as there are a couple of shots where the girl on the left’s nose looks distorted.

If her nose is naturally like that, I would suggest the girl in the orange poses like shot #8, it’s much more flattering.

Nice set of shots though, that’s what you should take from this.

#9 is my stand out one from the set.

 

[sconner]

Thank you for feedback guys! I shot all of them with 50mm, not having anything longer sadly

 

[gremlin16]

Thank you for feedback guys! I shot all of them with 50mm, not having anything longer sadly

50 is fine, all I would suggest is getting a fraction more distance between camera and subject.

 

[sconner]

Let me provide you with appropriate soundtrack to which browse this photos: The Rubberband Man by The Spinners

 

[juggler]

What a fab set!

3 is fabulous, 5 isn’t very flattering, 7 is superb, 11 is a bit too staged but overall v cool.