Critique Solitude.

[TGphoto]

Hi all,

Not sure whether this works or not. Not what I normally shoot but I was driving past the other day and happened to have my camera on me so jumped out and took a shot (ISO1250 as had no tripod).

[url=https://flic.kr/p/2b5ghdo]DSC_7259 by Thomas Green, on Flickr[/URL]

Let me know what you think

Tom

 

[Harlequin565]

Love it. Just a tad too much foreground for me.

 

[TGphoto]

Love it. Just a tad too much foreground for me.

Thanks for your input, I think you might be right, taken a little bit off and it does improve the image overall.

 

[alan72]

Love it. Just a tad too much foreground for me.

I'd like to see the edit, I think this can be a super image with a little off the bottom.

 

[TGphoto]

I'd like to see the edit, I think this can be a super image with a little off the bottom.

Hi Alan,

Here it is:

[url=https://flic.kr/p/2cRGcBq]DSC_7259 by Thomas Green, on Flickr[/URL]

 

[alan72]

Hi Alan,

Here it is:

DSC_7259 by Thomas Green, on Flickr

Definitely better! the initial foreground was quite overpowering in the original.

 

[alfbranch]

The edit is very nice