Critique Some from Old Moor

Hi Robin - just one pointer to start with - usually it's good to leave more space in the area in which the bird is looking/pointing i.e. in #3 - on the left of the bird and in #2 on the right of the bird … generally improves the composition

ideally do this when you are taking the shot, but in most instances, because they are usually crops there is flexibility in post

Good luck
 
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#1 should have been cropped and positioned as the subject is in #2 It`s also flying away from you which dooes not give it much interest.

#2 Exposure looks pretty good but the subject should be positioned over to the left,this as suggested gives it room to look into making the picture more balanced.

#3 The portriat crop may have worked if it had more space below,the image itself is overexposed with blown highlights on the subject.It also appears to be lacking in contrast and vibrancy.
 
Thanks for the replies, Ill take them on board, really constructive thanks

Robin
 
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