Some leaves....and a girl

[imattersuk]

Wendy-4 by Pete Downham Photography, on Flickr

 

[reheat module]

An extremely attractive model, potential in the coat and hood and a lovely bed of leaves.
The only thing I'm not 100% on is the angle you shot at; it's directly up her nostrils.
Hope you had the opportunity (and bravery) to perhaps move further up, directly above Wendy?

 

[F1.2]

I also agree the chin looks to high up , nice try and something different

 

[juggler]

It's a nice idea and close to working well but there are lots of little things which could do with tweaking.

The main problem is the lighting, though - you've got uplighting aka monster lighting, exacerbated by the low shooting angle relative to her face.

 

[pentaxpete]

and you have a BLUE colour cast -- if you did colour correction the leaves would have been more 'warm' and 'Autumnal' .

 

[mrtoad]

An extremely attractive model, potential in the coat and hood and a lovely bed of leaves.
The only thing I'm not 100% on is the angle you shot at; it's directly up her nostrils.
Hope you had the opportunity (and bravery) to perhaps move further up, directly above Wendy?