Some more of Helen

[icnoble]

I used one off camera flash for these, a godox AD200, the first time I have of f camera flash on location

 

[Mintchocs]

I like the last shot.

 

[Bobsyeruncle]

I agree, the last shot is really good.
I think it would have been even better had her arm been bare rather than in the shirt as it looks odd, particularly when her shoulders are bare.

 

[gerry s]

I really like the first one and it would have been bettered by the third if it wasnt for the blue sleeve which takes the edge off.... much better without it in my opinion.

 

[juggler]

Dappled light is really tricky. If you're going to use it you need to make more of a feature of it, I reckon.

 

[sk66]

TBH, I don't see any evidence of the flash other than the small catchlights in #2... I'm not sure what benefit it provided, if any.