Sophie

Expression and engagement are everything when shooting people. Do you think that this has those?
 
Her reflection in focus would improve this for me.

Plus white balance is off.

Unless that's the look you were going for (y)
 
Great concept, but I would have to agree with @Swissy and probably would have gone for the focus in the reflection - that's where the engagement is.
 
Thanks,I think I do have some with the reflection in focus.
 
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