1. You're excited about your camera. Get over it. It's not worth mentioning.
2. The image is fairly good as a composition. And nothing's blown! But what's that strip of detail along the top?
3. The hoodie figure is a presence in the frame, but too small within it to be fully realised. As such, it's almost an irritation, yet without it the image would be diminished.
4. There's a good dynamic from the graffiti wall and the ramped bench, centre.
No doubt you were flying by, in which case a good achievement as far as it goes, but some various other takes (angles, framings) might've been productive.