B&W South Bank with a Leica Q

It's a shame you didn't get the 3 concrete sections to run more across the frame, possibly from a lower perspective, leading the eye to the seated person. Potentially interesting, but not quite there this time *for me*.

You'd probably also get more comments if the image was embedded full size rather than thumbnail.
 
1. You're excited about your camera. Get over it. It's not worth mentioning.
2. The image is fairly good as a composition. And nothing's blown! But what's that strip of detail along the top?
3. The hoodie figure is a presence in the frame, but too small within it to be fully realised. As such, it's almost an irritation, yet without it the image would be diminished.
4. There's a good dynamic from the graffiti wall and the ramped bench, centre.

No doubt you were flying by, in which case a good achievement as far as it goes, but some various other takes (angles, framings) might've been productive.
 
1. You're excited about your camera. Get over it. It's not worth mentioning.
2. The image is fairly good as a composition. And nothing's blown! But what's that strip of detail along the top?
3. The hoodie figure is a presence in the frame, but too small within it to be fully realised. As such, it's almost an irritation, yet without it the image would be diminished.
4. There's a good dynamic from the graffiti wall and the ramped bench, centre.

No doubt you were flying by, in which case a good achievement as far as it goes, but some various other takes (angles, framings) might've been productive.


Fair points, thanks I will try and learn from them.
 
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