I wasn't sure whether it was too dark either. I've gone both lighter and darker and I'm not sure where the ideal point it.Loving this - great lines and I like the conversion, although I might have gone a bit brighter. My kind of shot entirely though.
Whereabouts are you taking this from ? In the Canary Wharf area itself or elsewhere ?
It is off the Canary Wharf area but I'm not sure whether photo permits are still needed or whether they would object to tripods if you were spotted. I got everything sorted out handheld - focus, exposure and filters - so only took a few seconds to set the camera on the tripod and take the shot. The place is full of photo opportunities though. I was really there to do some of the Jubilee Line tube stations.Now I have a camera again will have to get up that way...
The second shot is better, but not keen on the still water though.
I prefer your original. But then I like really contrasty images.
I agree with the comment above about the water looking too smooth. At first glance I thought you'd balanced your camera on a wall and we could see the wall in the bottom of the shot.