Spiral

[Snap11011]

Who likes this?

 

[praxis]

Too much space on the right side, and it doesnt stand out enough. And only partly in focus. But not bad for all that!

 

[Snap11011]

I was trying to do that rule of 3rds thing

 

[dazzajl]

I do.

I like how as you follow the spiral round with your eyes, it moves in and out of focus. Also the way that some of it is still while little bits seem to have some movement going on.

Nice.

 

[Deleted member 3428]

I agree with Praxis and the spiral is taking your eye out of the shot also as there isn't enough space above it too. Try this.... crop it in half and rotate it to the right so the coil is running from left to right. As we read from left to right it should take you through the shot better. Just a thought