Critique Spitfires & Hurricanes from Duxford Satutday 21st September 2019

[discoman]

Just three that I have sorted so far from Duxford the other week.

 

[cambsno]

2nd 2 you need to lift the shadows, and i dont like 2 as you have cut off the other planes.

 

[discoman]

Must admit Simon with no 2, I was not sure myself having the planes cut off but having revisited a few weeks later, yes I have to agree it's not working and thanks for the comments, they are appreciated.