Stag at Sunrise (Richmond Park)

Was a great morning to be in the park - probably the best this rut. You have captured the orange tones well, not quite so sure on the position of the stag. I guess it is the lie of the land, but because there is no visible horizon for reference, it looks like the camera if at a slant.

Stephen
 
A beauty. I also noticed the slant straight away but as Stephen said it's probably the lie of the land.
 
Renditiontastic.
 
"Excellent" shot Adrian.(y)

George.
 
Thanks everyone,and the slant yes I have spent a good couple of hours looking at it before I posted it and afterwards and it is the only thing Iam not happy with. It was the lie of the land I think. I have added another shot I took just afterwards below is this one a little better.

'The Rut' Part 2 During Sunrise at Richmond Park by -jones_adrian1-
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Lush. Good work mate cracking shot
 
Adrian they are both wicked,I'm quietly yearning for the same with fallow,just lovely mate !!

Ya know,I've thought about that slant a while it just looks like the fella is staring downward on his domain,to me,grasses follow that slant. It's so interesting hearing others thoughts though mate,it's made me ponder a while which is cool,but I have a definite preference for the first image

hope to see more soon good luck

Stu
 
Stuart Philpott said:
Adrian they are both wicked,I'm quietly yearning for the same with fallow,just lovely mate !!

Ya know,I've thought about that slant a while it just looks like the fella is staring downward on his domain,to me,grasses follow that slant. It's so interesting hearing others thoughts though mate,it's made me ponder a while which is cool,but I have a definite preference for the first image

hope to see more soon good luck

Stu
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Thank you for taking the time to provide feedback it is very much appreciated. If I can make people ponder or make people think or suggest other ideas I feel my work has been worthwhile. Thanks adrian
 
I love these type of silhouettes in the golden light that comes through the mist. I'm not bothered by the slant, have you tried rotating a little to see how it looks? I prefer the first, there is a little too much empty space in the upper area for me in the second.

Nicely done!
 
alan72 said:
I love these type of silhouettes in the golden light that comes through the mist. I'm not bothered by the slant, have you tried rotating a little to see how it looks? I prefer the first, there is a little too much empty space in the upper area for me in the second.

Nicely done!
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Here is a straightened version of the original :)

Untitled by Adrian Jones, on Flickr
 
And here is a closer cropped straightened version,it is all subjective and i could go on uploading various versions but this will be the last one for today,thanks for all of the feedback. :)
Untitled by Adrian Jones, on Flickr
 
Matty and Adam many thanks i think jam happy with it now :)
 
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