Trinity College , Cambridge

That's pretty, with a lot of potential in a sweet way.

Since you posted in a crit section: looking at the pic on Flickr, there's a lot of green fringing around the crenellations on the towers. The method used to darken the sky appears to have spilled onto the tops of the towers, and there are some masking artifacts around the twigs on the tree (possibly from software CA correction - this kind of thing is hard to avoid sometimes). The sky feels a little too dark & heavy compared to the bright and colourful foreground, and the highlights of the clouds have gone 'grubby'.

Hope that's useful - I'm not just criticising for the sake of it.
 
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That's pretty, with a lot of potential in a sweet way.

Since you posted in a crit section: looking at the pic on Flickr, there's a lot of green fringing around the crenellations on the towers. The method used to darken the sky appears to have spilled onto the tops of the towers, and there are some masking artifacts around the twigs on the tree (possibly from software CA correction - this kind of thing is hard to avoid sometimes). The sky feels a little too dark & heavy compared to the bright and colourful foreground, and the highlights of the clouds have gone 'grubby'.

Hope that's useful - I'm not just criticising for the sake of it.
Thanks for the constructive critic , much appreciated
 
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