The background is lovely, my rule of thumb though is to light the bride.
On a personal note, just MHO but I dislike snogging pictures, again, the rule of thumb being a near snog is much more attractive / romantic.
I think it's very nice.
But I would have moved the light more to the front (or added a second). It's throwing some pretty strong shadows in places I'd rather it didn't (faces). A little lower camera angle would have put their heads above the trees...
It's a lot easier to spot "issues" after the fact. It's a little harder to know how to correct them. But it's the ability to see/fix them at the time that separates the greats from the rest of us... I'm not one of them...My biggest regret is the shadows on their face, so I do completely agree. Also, the lower angle is a great idea too! Thanks Steven
Bracket/Blend...Not enough power unforunately!