1 Of my first Photos

[JonnyW]

It may not be brilliant but this was one of the first photos i took and editied. any comments would be nice

Thanks

Not edited

edited

 

[EdinburghGary]

I think you would be better seeking the best light, and waiting on it. Sunrise and Sunset is best. Keep at it and post back.

Gary.

 

[simeon]

not keen on the edited one sorry, (prefer the original) but has gary said would look very nice at sunrise/set you have the right location just get it at the right time and you'd have a beautiful picture.

thanks sim

 

[macmike]

I'd make two adjustments to your editing process:

First: the horizon is wonky :nono:
second: (and more subjective) perhaps slightly too close-cropped from top and/or bottom. I'd prefer it less panoramic, if you know what I mean?

 

[Duckydoodle]

Not bad for a first shot. Composition's ok but as has already been pointed out the poor light let your image down. Go back as Gary suggested at sunrise or sunset or on a sunnier day and you'll have a great shot. The edited version with the artificial filter doesn't work for me.

 

[Susane]

Nice try for a 1st photo, a little editing and you could improve it. With more practise you'll be able to get it right in camera too.

Here's a quick edit to the levels in your photo, not brilliant because of the small file size that you've uploaded.
And before the horizon police mention it...no I haven't straightened them ;

And one that's cropped and added a warming filter;

 

[TomB]

I actually quite like Jonny's edit

It's pulled something aesthetically pleasing out of an what was a pretty dreary old shot (I mean that in a good way!).

It's hard to find much use for images that sort of dimension though.