Captive 3 BLACK SUIT - Submerged

[peter423564]

Submerged underwater
Letting go of everything
Dance freely with the flow

MOD EDIT: PLEASE DO NOT PIMP YOUR FACEBOOK PAGE IN EVERY POST

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[Pookeyhead]

Nice.

The Haiku (reads like one.. not counted the syllables) just gives enough to make the viewer get a sense of the story. The hand shot is a little over processed... it's starting to intrude and it doesn't need it.

I hate the branding and watermark though.. cheapens it as a concept. Just let the image and words do what they do... no distractions. Have all that on the website etc, but leave the images alone.

Stop collecting likes though.. that cheapens YOU as a photographer. Your work is not directly proportional to the amount of likes it gets. It means nothing. Traffic on a Facebook page also won't get you where you want to go.

 

[The23rdman]

What David said to the letter.

 

[peter423564]

thx for you guys advice,