3 lovely ladies and a beautiful morning

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I'm still new to this and always looking to improve. Any C&C appreciated. No post-processing applied, except for slight cropping. All images converted to JPEG using the DPP software given by Canon. I'm truly amazed at what the kit lens is capable of.

Angela
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Amelia
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Liting
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Hi

My knowledge of portrait photography is, well, nothing, but here goes. I've tried to put down some constructive critisim, no offence meant.

1. I think you've captured a great expression, though there is too much empty space on the left for me, if feels a little unbalanced.

2. I'm not sure if it was the intention, but I find the two different colour backgrounds a little distracting.

3. The arm seems to have some blown highlights, also ther is a stray hair on the left arm \ shoulder.

4. I can see what you wre trying here, but I don't think the hand in the hair really works here.

Overall very good though!

Good luck

Al
 
The last one is my favourite, I love the lighting.

They're gorgeous! Nice choice of models :)
 
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