I think, for set up photos, they fall a little wide of the mark. The first needs a little more pop. She could also look less bored and be posed in a more flattering way. Maybe try bringing her arms a little lower and turn her slightly. See if that flatters her rather then this which doesn't.
The second needs a straighten. As you're in control of it her headwear colour doesn't match her dress which makes the headband look white and he dress dirty.Her pose makes her look very bottom heavy, especially with an empty hand. try to get her to stand more naturally, again aim to flatter. Think about how she's stood like that, get her into a more relaxed pose. No-one stands like she is. Lastly, and its just a little thing, clone out the bright spot on the fountain base
