Critique A few from today
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I really like these Gary, shame she is not looking up in the last
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I do like the first. The reflections add something to it
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Thanks for taking the time to reply. Yeah the first with the reflection is probably my favourite of the three, not sure about the colour cast I ended up with on the 2nd one and for some reason I liked the 3rd better before I posted it on here 
I thought head down mighta been kinda more natural or something but you are probably right, might have been better here if she were staring straight down the lens....
I thought head down mighta been kinda more natural or something but you are probably right, might have been better here if she were staring straight down the lens....
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1) Awesome
2) Don't like the processing.
3) The framing is very tight and it's a little wonky. It don't get the story in this one either.
Remember, sometime less is more. If you had just posted the first you'd have been a hero. The other two drag you down (for me).
2) Don't like the processing.
3) The framing is very tight and it's a little wonky. It don't get the story in this one either.
Remember, sometime less is more. If you had just posted the first you'd have been a hero. The other two drag you down (for me).
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#1 Fantastic - love the reflections and pose
#2 I love the idea but I find there is a bit of unfortunate cropping going on
#3 is very interesting but I think the angles are all wrong - the model is in the centre of the picture but not in the centre of the alley way which means the image is asymmetrical - which doesn't seem right, model should have perhaps looked up (without raising her head)
#2 I love the idea but I find there is a bit of unfortunate cropping going on
#3 is very interesting but I think the angles are all wrong - the model is in the centre of the picture but not in the centre of the alley way which means the image is asymmetrical - which doesn't seem right, model should have perhaps looked up (without raising her head)
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Very nice Namast, I especially like the first two. I love it when a photograph tells a story. Made me wonder who she was waiting for. Thanks for sharing.
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Like them all Gary although the first is definitely the best. The reflection lifts the shot above the norm and I like the wistful expression in the 2nd. No3 is the weakest of the set but still the grungy setting with a beautiful girl is classic.
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1 + 2 are really great images! I love the reflection in the first. You would think it might be too distracting, but its not at all and totally works. And 2, the processing really works with what the model is wearing.
3, for me is just not interesting enough
3, for me is just not interesting enough
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At first glance at the first I wondered if it was a serendipitous candid street shot!