A portrait and an apology

[The23rdman]

I like that, Simon, but I'd tweak the levels a little and add about 1/2 a stop. Might be a good one for testing your dodge and burn skills out.

 

[simon ess]

Thanks Dean. I'll have a play.

 

[The23rdman]

I'd love to show you, but you have a no edit policy.

 

[simon ess]

Oh that's there for a slightly odd reason.

Please feel free. I've had a play and it would be great to compare yours to my effort before I post it.

 

[The23rdman]

I can't download it, Simon.

 

[simon ess]

Sorry Dean. Should be OK now.

 

[The23rdman]

Here you go...

 

[The23rdman]

I decided not to add any exposure once the levels were tweaked. I like it slightly under - more intimate.

 

[simon ess]

That's fabulous Dean. Thanks very much. It's a subtle but significant improvement.

I'll now try to match it.

 

[Tintin124]

Ahhh man I need that umbrella to come through soon... am going to take my time with 1 light first. As I have a massive window I can always use as a 2nd light and maybe a hair light.

I'm learning so much though at the moment.

 

[simon ess]

Here's my attempt at matching Dean's version.

DSC_4066 Reworked by simon ess, on Flickr

 

[simon ess]

I'm quite proud of that, so it's my new avatar.

Big, big thank you to Dean for all the help and advice.