A recent portrait

[benwulfphoto]

A portrait from a shoot this week. Happy for any CC. Cheers. BW

 

[Deleted member 95430]

Are there any others in the set? Top right maybe too bright, his express seems like hes quite p***ed off and his foot has been chopped off

 

[benwulfphoto]

Ahh yes! loads! I'll have a look about. Yeah, I added some light with a 2nd strobe top right. Glad he looks annoyed! I wanted that " what are you doing here, this is my space vibe".

Thanks for the CC

BWx

 

[juggler]

Ahh yes! loads! I'll have a look about. Yeah, I added some light with a 2nd strobe top right. Glad he looks annoyed! I wanted that " what are you doing here, this is my space vibe".

Thanks for the CC

BWx

Interesting, and that's the main thing! Not quite sure the composition works for the

" what are you doing here, this is my space vibe"

Stuck in the bottom corner he's not really asserting himself over the space and frame - and then the eye is drawn to the bright spot top right which weakens it still further.