Critique April - On the bed

[Gav.]

Hi all

So sorry to be adding a few posts of late, I wanted to try and get April at her relaxed state on our bed, the stormy weather helped as she wanted to stay in and huddle up.

Please feel free to C&C

90D - EF 50mm f/1.8 II

1/50 - f2.8 - ISO1000 - flash bounced of high side of wall

Thank you for looking


April on the bed by Gavin Wickham, on Flickr

 

[antonroland]

Can’t say I see much (if anything!) wrong with that!

 

[Gav.]

Can’t say I see much (if anything!) wrong with that!

Thank you

 

[Deleted member 34016]

Looks ok to me too Gav- I must say that Title drew me straight to the post- Ha ha I wrong was I

 

[Gav.]

Looks ok to me too Gav- I must say that Title drew me straight to the post- Ha ha I wrong was I

Thanks Les I'll have too use better titles from now on then

 

[Jungli]

Looks great good amount of detail. For me the dark, top-right, of the photograph is a little distracting, but miles better than my attempts. Could you flip the photograph, l-r, just a thought.

 

[Gav.]

Looks great good amount of detail. For me the dark, top-right, of the photograph is a little distracting, but miles better than my attempts. Could you flip the photograph, l-r, just a thought.

Thank you

Like this ... (may be a quality drop as I did This on my phone)

 

[Jungli]

I like that much better no idea why.

 

[Gav.]

I like that much better no idea why.

I can't decide which one now

 

[Jungli]

I have to admit, I think it's April's eyeline. Looking into the shot rather than out.

But do was the other one.

Dang nabbit