Critique April - She's back on the bed

[Gav.]

Hi,

Sorry, I know I've put a few up, I'll move on soon

Two shots of April, any feed back welcome

Thanks for looking

Gav


April relaxing by Gavin Wickham, on Flickr

This one just for the look on her face


April.. by Gavin Wickham, on Flickr

 

[wornish]

How can you not love her?

 

[Gav.]

How can you not love her?

Thanks, shes great, hates me with the camera though

 

[Lepus]

I think the top pic is your best so far , I took a liberty and cropped your image to this , which I think improves it further , and adds some impact . Well done .

 

[Gav.]

I think the top pic is your best so far , I took a liberty and cropped your image to this , which I think improves it further , and adds some impact . Well done .

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No worries Thank you, I must admit, I do like the crop, I did do a few tries myself but I was worried about cropping her, I don't know why
Thanks again
Gav

 

[Deleted member 34016]

Personally No2 for me Gav- love the eye contact and yes she hates you

Les

cropped and brought out the eyes a tad

 

[Gav.]

Personally No2 for me Gav- love the eye contact and yes she hates you

Les

cropped and brought out the eyes a tad

Thanks Les, I nearly binned this one as I felt the front red blur was too much, but I liked the look on her face, Thanks for the edit I'll look at it again

 

[cargo]

Wow there both great Gav.

I hope you gonna get some of these printed at some point.

The eye contact in the edit by Les is fab. You can feel her glare.

Gaz

 

[Gav.]

Wow there both great Gav.

I hope you gonna get some of these printed at some point.

The eye contact in the edit by Les is fab. You can feel her glare.

Gaz

Thanks Gaz

I am going to look again at this one, I didn't do much with it as I didn't feel it was quite right.

I am going to look at getting some done