Beck's

[Creative-snaps]

Thanks for your comments on my previous image.

Camera -
Canon 7D

Lens -
Canon 18-55 (kit lens)

Lighting -
2 x 28" soft box fitted with SB 80's, one at each side of her and slightly behind for the rim.
1 vivitar 285 bounced off an Umbrella to the front (butterfly). I used a white table for fill.

Background - 4ft white seamless.

 

[mrtoad]

i cant fault this really as to lighting or composition
here are my 'not really good at portraits' comments
is the head meant to be cut off as shown
would you think the bracelet distracting and the lowered thumb
would the hands be better as the base of the shot as if looking over a fence...the fence being a frame around the shot

notwithstanding those comments...i like the shot
cheers
geof

 

[Creative-snaps]

Cheers mrtoad. I have added a better version minus the crop.

 

[mrtoad]

Cheers mrtoad. I have added a better version minus the crop.

thats a better balance!!
cheers
geof