BiF. first real attempts.

Well the first two are crackers :), and I definitely wouldn't have thought it was your first set of BIF. The third has too messy a background and the wings are clipped.
 
squizza said:
Well the first two are crackers :), and I definitely wouldn't have thought it was your first set of BIF. The third has too messy a background and the wings are clipped.
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yeah, she came in too hot, and i wasnt quick enough to zoom out a little, but like the detail in her face/head.
 
For your first go at BIF you have done well, number 2 is my favourite. Captive birds are great for practice and the results can be well worthwhile, well done (y)
Number 3 is rather underexposed, you could possibly pull this back a bit in PP, if you can, and recover some more detail, even with the wings clipped it could become an interesting shot.
 
Trev4 said:
For your first go at BIF you have done well, number 2 is my favourite. Captive birds are great for practice and the results can be well worthwhile, well done (y)
Number 3 is rather underexposed, you could possibly pull this back a bit in PP, if you can, and recover some more detail, even with the wings clipped it could become an interesting shot.
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DPP_0007 exposed by patientx2000, on Flickr

took a play with the curves
 
steevee said:

DPP_0007 exposed by patientx2000, on Flickr

took a play with the curves
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Thats an improvement for sure, you could still go a bit further though. I hope you dont mind but I had a little play with your pic, with only a small JPEG there isnt a lot of info for me to work with so this isnt very good, I hope it gives an idea though. If you want this removed please say so, its no problem at all.

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